Pretty good--thought it's seem like you outrighted stolen from the orignal 80's "Transformers: Movie" for the transforming of Megatron into Galavatron.

Hi, it's me again. Glad to see you're continuing this story so quickly. I read the first part of your third season and wanted to give you some of my impressions: I like that you let some time pass between the seasons. It gives Magnus/Magna time to grow into the leadership role instead of ridiculing him like the movie did. I also like the subtle changes you made to Megatron's conversion into Galvatron, though I'm still not certain how much of Megatron remains. Looking forward to seeing how you continue this. What I didn't like was that, from the impressions I got, Magna just sat back for fifteen years and let the Decepticons tear each other apart. I would have thought he'd take more advantage of their confusion and I'd guess that people like Grimlock are not too happy about his chosen course of action. I would have liked some more backstory and how this decision came about and how others reacted to it (including that peace movement you introduced recently). All in all, a good start to season 3. I think you need to provide some more backstory before jumping into more action. I also hope we'll see Starscream again soon, seeing as his spark is immortal. Will Hot Rod become Rodimus Prime in your story, too? If yes, I hope you take some time getting around to that. I want to see Magna Prime some more, first. Take care and keep on writing!