Name: squirrel27 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/03 - 07:57 pm · For Chapter: Do Predacons Dream Of Robotic Sheep?

Have to say, I was a little bothered canon-wise by the unexpected situation Razorclaw experiences, until the context became clear at the end. Good work, and it does raise some interesting questions. I've run across the idea of... that particular gestalt... several times when ambling through the World Wide Web, and there's a true point about the potential for some psychological warfare. The text could use a little fine-tuning, but the concept is solid and well-presented.

Name: Anonymous (Signed) · Date: 28/10/02 - 05:30 pm · For Chapter: Do Predacons Dream Of Robotic Sheep?

Ha! Gestalt Team commanders must be a stressful lot, I take it? ;) I like this. The imagery is pretty good, and I'm gradually coming to very much like first-person. you may have even sparked an idea in my head... *shakes fist* :)

Name: Kevona (Signed) · Date: 12/10/02 - 09:08 am · For Chapter: Do Predacons Dream Of Robotic Sheep?

*grin* This is a really fun fic, with a well-placed twist at the end. Sweet idea, and I'll agree that Reflections of a King is inspiring. Good job, Tremor!