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Seeing Past the Sigil by kidu

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: A Quintesson trap sends Strafe, Lightspeed, Cyclonus and Scourge into Cybertron's distant history. And if there aren't any Decepticons around to harbor Cyclonus until he can return... well, he'll just have to convert someone!
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/04/04 Title: Chapter 1: Seeing Past the Sigil

"You're talking to my chest again" ....Best line in a TF fic ever.

On the whole, I really liked this. I alway like time travel stories, particularly when the travelers become an active part of history, as in War Dawn and Forever is a Long Time Coming.

On the other hand... Cyclonus feels mixed in this, much more emotional than I'd normally expect of him, but the "side of someone we don't normally get to see" is a fic standard, so I'll gladly accept it, as it makes him even more well rounded a character.

Now... as to Beta. This is where I'm gonna have to disagree. Not that we see much of her, but I'd say she's an Autobot true and blue and throug, mostly because I say a protective instinct is hardwired into Autobots, and that creates everything else about their basic philosophies. To have been created one means that's a part of her too. But... that's imposing a bit too much of my own views on your fic-verse, so I'll forgive it, as it was still very intriquing and interesting.



So That He May Have Mercy by Starhorse

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: Sunstreaker's violent nature finally earns him a court martial, and what he finds at his trial leaves him a bit shaken. Features Jazz and Sunstreaker.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/10/03 Title: Chapter 1: So That He May Have Mercy

Holy freakin' cheese! Man, Horsey, I might not like Sunny that much, but this made me feel for him... and fear him. ...I have no words for how good this is.



The Die Long Cast by Merytneith

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: The intertwining origins of six G1 Transformers, and how each was cast into his ultimate destiny as either Autobot or Decepticon by the actions of the seventh character. Featured: Windcharger, Frenzy, Mirage, Starscream, Trailbreaker, Quake... and the on
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/03 Title: Chapter 1: The Die Long Cast

This was good... but not great. Each individual story has a lot of potential, but, I do not think they weave together particularly well. Also, I think that each has the potnential to be a story of greater length in and of itself. And, and I know its a stylistic thing, and that it differs for each writer, but the reference to Mirage's mother grates on me, as, even without the notion of TFs having kids, them adopting such relationship qualifiers seems... iffy to me. This has much potential, but ...I think its reaching too far.



Ride the Ride by Liana_Bluestar

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: Frenzy learns a thing or two about himself after he's captured by Autobots.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/04/03 Title: Chapter 1: Ride the Ride

Very spiffy!



Transformers Fanfic by Charl

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star Feature
Summary: What are the features of Transformers fanfic and what kind of person writes it?
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/10/03 Title: Chapter 1: Transformers Fanfic

Wow. Just... wow. Very impressive, very well researched, well expressed, and very insightful.



Dolly Doesn't Want to Play by Pitten

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: Following the death of Optimus Prime, Elita-One reflects on her life and makes a disturbing epiphany about the nature of relationship with the Autobot leader and society in general. Warning: Not a fluffy love story.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24/02/03 Title: Chapter 1: Dolly Doesn't Want to Play

Overall, really good and interesting, even if I really don't agree with some of the points raised.



Collateral Damage by PrincessArtemis

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: The first day awake for the second wave of Autobots ends up being a deadly one for a few humans caught in the crossfire.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/02/03 Title: Chapter 1: Collateral Damage

Extremely good, especially as I got to see this be worked and grow over time. You've definitely got a knack for Percy's voice and Wheeljack too! Bravo Princess!



Cyclonus's Report by Neale_Davidson

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: With the situation on Earth getting desperate for the Decepticons, Cyclonus gives a report back to Cybertron, explaining the Minicon war, and his take on recent events.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/02/03 Title: Chapter 1: Cyclonus's Report

About time this series picked up again! You really need to be writing for the show! Looking forward to seeing more of your interpretation!



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Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/10/03 Title: None

An extremely insightful look at the little red guy, Rap. One I'd never even thought of. Good work!



An Odd Little Lament by Liana_Bluestar

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: An old warrior reflects on the changes of war. **Readers can guess as to who the speaker is**
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/03 Title: Chapter 1: An Odd Little Lament

Cute nice, Li! Course, I already know who it is, but it made me think of a few different people, including a couple you wouldn't be so happy about... But ya did good!



Countermoves by Stormy

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: Punch (or is he Counterpunch?) must decide where his true loyalties lie.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27/05/03 Title: Chapter 1: Countermoves

Very interesting, if a completely different take than my own. I'm quite certain that Punch is the true self of the famed Double-Spy, though I'd also say he has a case of Multiple Personality Disorder. Anyway, I'm rambling, but I like this, even if I don't agree with it.



I Will Take Care of You by Liana_Bluestar

Rated: G • starstarstarhalf-star
Summary: Tragedy strikes Soundwave and the cassettes. ~Author's note: This is a Legends' Children story but, upon reading it over, it also makes a very good Season 3 story so here it is.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/06/03 Title: Chapter 1: I Will Take Care of You

Very nice, Li! Very sad too... you definitely have the characterizations of Rumble and Frenzy down and an excellent grasp of Sounders.



Postscript by Scott_Kampa

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: It's Gears in the rain. After the attack on Autobot City. Trying to be strong.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/03 Title: Chapter 1: Postscript

To borrow a phrase, "You've got the touch!" Scott. I am in awe.



Living Without by Liana_Bluestar

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: We take many people for granted, not truly realizing how much they mean to us until they're gone.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/03 Title: Chapter 1: Living Without

Goodness but this is depressing. Bravo, Ms. Bluestar, bravo!



Life of a Soldier by Lunatron_Insecticon

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: A look into the life of a common Decepticon.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/10/03 Title: Chapter 1: Life of a Soldier

An excellent look at what was otherwise a throw-away character, Luna. A great little narrative and very insightful into post-Prime and Megatron Cybertron.



But They Might Hope by Starhorse

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: Prowl and Sideswipe are either contestants in the Snark-o-lympics, or they're busy waiting for Godot. You decide.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/10/03 Title: Chapter 1: But They Might Hope

I've comment on how insightful this is before... But I do have two questions. 1)Lamborghini senses?! 2) Uh... can't Sideswipe fly? He's got a rocket-pack.



Autobotimal Planet by Starhorse

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: What happens when Animal Planet and the Autobots collide? Bad, bad fiction.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/10/03 Title: Chapter 1: Autobotimal Planet

This was... bizare beyond words. Hysterical, but ....*goes into a snicker fit*



Blue 42 by Starhorse

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: The Autobots play football, (but not by choice), while Dead End hurls morbid rants at the nearest woodland creature. Moral of the story? Prowl is meaner than yo mama.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/04/04 Title: Chapter 1: Blue 42

Oh Primus... This is one of the funniest things ever. You, Starhorse, are a master of all things Prowl.



Parallels by Jazz

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: The Autobots get ready as the situation heats up and the leader of the Decepticons is revealed, but not all is as it seems.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/04/04 Title: Chapter 1: Parallels

Nice to see Universe is starting to get its share of fics! Some really good stuff, especially in the interaction between the Autobots, RiD Autobots, and Maximals. One thing to watch out for though, is the blending of the various Gen.1/Gen.2 continuity bits. You mention both Slag and Slingshot being dead, as from the Gen.2 comic, but they both show up later on it the fic. Not especially distracting, but something to keep a closer eye on.



Fembot Got Rack! by peppermintwind

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: ...There really is no explanation for this.
Reviewer: Zylly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/09/04 Title: Chapter 1: Fembot Got Rack!

Oh, you, my friends, are not right. You are delightful! Not to mention funny as heck!