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Tales of the Intermezzo: Old Flame by Dave_Van_Domelen

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: Category: Armada/Energon A few years before Transformers: Energon, Alexis deals with personal issues and has a heart-to-heart with someone who appears to be a stranger....
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: Tales of the Intermezzo: Old Flame

It\'s good to see a well done story that\'s written from the point of view of the human bystanders caught up in Transformers. It\'s something that gets overlooked a lot. I really like this, it\'s interesting to see what Alexis thinks of Starscream now that she\'s older.



The Odyssey Begins by Philister

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: The war on Cybertron has stagnated to a bloody stalemate when the supercomputer Vector Sigma becomes active again, sending a group of three young Autobots and one bitter veteran into space to locate the Ark and the long-lost Autobot leader Optimus Prime.
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Odyssey Begins

A very good read. :) It is always nice to see extra development of Arcee, I like her role as the level headed one of the Terrible Trio. Showing the relationship between her and the other Autobot femmes was a nice touch as well.



The Ambush by Philister

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: Kup, Springer, Hot Rod, and Arcee set off on their journey to find the Ark and Optimus Prime. The Decepticons have other ideas, though, and might put an end to the Odyssey before it has even begun.
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Ambush

A good continuation of your story. I really appreciate the fact that Blaster is in this, as well as Sixshot.



All Good things... by Meister

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: Ever wonder why Jazz didn't appear after Transformers the Movie, except for a brief cameo at the Galactic Olympics in Five Faces of Darkness? The real life reason that Jazz vanished was because of his voice actor. The character...
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: All Good things...

I like this. I just do. It\'s well written and has a good story line. The format was a bit confusing at first, but that\'s probably just my fault for being so tired. You had me a bit worried there towards the end, but the ending itself was a nice twist.



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Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/08/04 Title: None

An entertaining start, I really had to laugh at Scavenger\'s boldness. Looks good so far, looking forward to reading more. :)



The Night of the Functional Deactivated by Philister

Rated: G • starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Stranded on the planet of junk, the Autobots must face an army of zombie robots and compete with a desperate Decepticon. There is someone else on that planet, though, someone who has built himself some friends that transform into giant metal beasts.
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Night of the Functional Deactivated

Now here\'s an interesting twist, Wheeljack getting left behind on some junk planet...interesting.



The Anima, Unbound by Burnout

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: With Cyclonus on their tails, and the rest of the Decepticons hot on his heels, Judith and Sideswipe must forge a fast alliance in order to survive. But with the Autobots two steps behind, will Judith's resourcefulness alone see her through, or will she
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/09/04 Title: Chapter 1: The Anima, Unbound

I got to admit, I was rather skeptical about this story when I clicked on it, knowing what I do about Witchblade. However you\'ve managed to pull off a really good crossover between the two, it helps that you\'ve brought the Witchblade to the Transformers and not the other way around. Great job on this, the pacing is well done and it\'s overall a good read. :)



Traitor by Meister

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: Why was Cliffjumper so happy to jump to the conclusion that Mirage was a traitor in the Generation one episode 'Traitor', when previously there was little to no conflict between the pair? 22 Minutes is never enough to tell the whole story ---Events take p
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/09/04 Title: Chapter 1: Traitor

Another really enjoyable read. I like finding out what other people think Mirage started out as. I really like that you've come up with the idea of him living this continuous lie as an Autobot.



And Away We Go! by Meister

Rated: G • starstarstarstarstar
Summary: What's better than kicking back on a sunny day, and having fun with a friend? Yeah. There's a story behind this one, but it can't be told here. :) (Acrylic painting, 24"X36")
Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: And Away We Go!

Ah cool. This is a painting, right? I really like your application of the white on this. Looks good. :)



Naph's Imagination Runs Away With Her! by Tripleguess

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary:

... not that she minds!

Fancharacter Venture undertakes his most challenging mission yet: to abduct his creator!

I drew this as a birthday gift for Naphtali Phoenix. It started as a small pencil scribble; just an idea-generating session whi

Reviewer: NaphtaliPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: Naph's Imagination Runs Away With Her!

*glomps* He\'s mine, all mine! ^_^ *purrs happily* That\'s all you\'re getting out of me here, you\'ll have to track me down by e-mail for an in-depth crit, if you want it. :) Thanks again!