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Simply fantastic, more deserving of being called a novel than a 'fic'- the *over* used *emphasis* of *words* notwithstanding, which I didn't find as tiresome as others, but still could have done with thinning out. It was good to see a fiction take a 'cold fish' like Prowl and not shy away from that aspect of him, but instead use and embrace it. Everyone was perfect here, from Megatron to Warpath, and I loved the more 'down-to-Earth' take on the war- that it was a war which escalated into racial polarisation, rather than a "Megatron's Master Plan" from the start. Possibly my favourite bit was the observation that Megatron would keep coming back until he had to crawl to Iacon and gnaw the gates with his teeth- although the use of Combaticons was another inspired bit, and the Real Reason for Unfinished Vos was a classic. So, Ironhide's a Southerner, is he? :-) Yep, that sounds about right.








An interesting and different look at Mirage, a character who's always struck me as having rather more potential than the cartoon or comic ever really made use of. I also felt his assessment of the character differences between the two factions was pretty much spot on, and you point up his dilemma- intellectually more at home with Decepticon philosophy, but emotionally and socially an Autobot, he's an outsider everywhere.