Wow. I'm amazed. The beginnings of peace on Cybertron? (Not likely, but eh, a girl can dream...) I really enjoyed Starscream, Thundercracker, Megatron and Optimus Prime. You have a balanced view of both factions and I really appreciate it. Keep writing, I would dearly love to see what happens next!

wow ok, that was looooong! Its a very good story dont get me wrong, I enjoyed most of it but I have a few bones to pick with it here and there... the main one being the length of it. a tad bit too long for my liking.. it would have been better if you could have split this one up into maybe two or three parts. secondly.. I dont agree with some of the personalities. Prowl's in particular.. I dont think he would say some of the things in the way that he said it, if ya get my meaning.. other than those two though.. good story!