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Name: Morncreek (Signed) ·
Date: 11/12/06 - 03:41 am ·
For Chapter: BotCon 2000
I traversed through many emotions when I read this: humor, thoughtfulness, surprise, sadness, happiness. It was also useful in pointing out some stories that I may find worth reading. The ending to the story though kind of feels abrupt. All in all, the writing is solid, with very little grammatical or spelling error; yet, a few parts where it is somewhat difficult to understand what is being said by whom.
As for the groups that humans fall into, I think I would be predominantly an Autobot follower. However, setting aside moral judgements, I can see the truth in both Autobot and Decepticon philosophies. If I were strictly Autobot, I would miss the other half of the story; and I believe that by gathering all the stories, all the perspectives, together is when the most complete form of the truth may be discerned. In other words, a tapestry with a picture on it cannot be woven with one thread of wool.
Name: Angelwings (Signed) ·
Date: 18/01/04 - 10:37 am ·
For Chapter: BotCon 2000
I like it!