---QUOTE--- "What happened to meeting back at my place?" Artemis demanded. "Couldn't. Locked." Narrowing her optics, Artemis glared at the large red and black Minicon. "It was locked the last time you snuck in." "Nope. Window was open." "What? I never open my windows!" ---ENDQUOTE--- * Seeing as her bay window is ajar when she gets to her apartment -- is Venge talking about the present and saying that her window is open right now, or is he referring to the first time he came into her apartment ("window WAS open")? * Why does Artimes tolerate the touch of a Decepticon? (Impassiveness? Refusing to visibly react?) * There are about twenty characters so far. (Artemis, Dippy, Venge, Greyshard, Cavalier, Boomer, Sledge, Buzzkill, Darxtar, Hot Shot, Optimus Prime, Scavenger, Red Alert, Runaway, Jetstorm, Sonar, Swindle, Starscream, Megatron, and Sparkplug.) Some of them have similar coloration. (Swindle is red and black, Starscream is red and silver, Boomer is red and pewter.) Might a character list (name, brief description) be feasible? Like some Star Wars books have a "Dramatis Personae" reference page in front to help readers remember who's who. * Looking forward to No Remorse. =) (I REALLY hope my line breaks show this time... if they don't, I'll put this review on fanfiction too, so you can read an ungarbled version.)